Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should a learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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coherence cohesion
The essay lacks a clear logical structure, making it difficult for the reader to follow the progression of ideas. The argument should be organized into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a single main idea, supported by specific examples or explanations. Transitional phrases can also help in guiding the reader through the arguments made.
task achievement
The response touches on both views of the argument but fails to provide a clear, detailed explanation of why people might learn a foreign language beyond travel and work. The examples used are too general and do not effectively illustrate the points. A complete response must thoroughly address all parts of the prompt, including a clear personal opinion, which is underdeveloped in this essay.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.