The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps show the developments which took place in the resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, a comparison
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the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape. In 1990, the town was a much greener recreation
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with a huge amount of trees and individual houses, but during the next 15
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the town experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees east of the
river
were cut down, with all the houses on the south along the future railway line being knocked down and replaced by
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.
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, a new industrial estate with
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and pier sprang up on the seashore. Only a few trees on the west of the
river
remained. The woodland was cleared to make way for
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houses,
supermarket
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and road facilities.
Further
developments were the construction of an airport near the
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corner of
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and
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stretch of railway that
connect
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two sides of the
river
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coastal resort
  • Development
  • Infrastructure
  • Commercial district
  • Residential area
  • Harbor
  • Marina
  • Pedestrian walkways
  • Urban planning
  • Environmental impact
  • Renovation
  • Tourism industry
  • Recreational facilities
  • Expansion
  • Accessibility
  • Modernization
  • Attraction
  • Accommodation
  • Economic growth
  • Leisure activities
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