The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The diagram demonstrates the hydrologic cycle.
Overall
,
according to
the process, the cycle comprises four main stages. Started with the evaporation of
ocean
water
, progressing through the precipitation and ending with
water
returning to the
ocean
and evaporation again. Now turning to the details, the
ocean
water
being
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heated by sunlight, and as
result
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evaporates into
the
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invisible
water
vapour.
After
this
, condensing
water
vapour transforms
to
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the
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a
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cloud.
Subsequently
,
this
cloud formation carried
be
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wind
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a wind
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to coastal areas. As soon as clouds
being
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propelled
be
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wind to higher land, the clouds fall down as abundant rain.
Following
this
, all the
water
transformed into lakes,
at
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the same time portion of
water
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the water
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immediately goes onto the grass.
Finally
, the groundwater
go
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out as
river
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a river
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and flows into the
ocean
through the
salt
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saltwater
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water
intrusion.
Thus
, the
water
starts his journey repeatedly and systematically.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ocean, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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