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The table below show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people (Club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theatre.

The table below show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people (Club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theatre.
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The table represents data on responses given by
club
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members
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 and the general public regarding a new theatre. Apparently, at first glance, it can be clearly noticed that there are different opinions given by
both
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 the groups, in some matters responses were similar but in others, they were varying. In each
category
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, the proportion of those giving excellent and satisfactory were higher than those who were rating it poor. Beginning with the production quality of the theatre, there are almost similar numbers (70% and 67%) of
club
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 subscribers and outsider public respectively gave the excellent rating.
Both
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 the groups evaluated the production
category
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 as satisfactory with 17% and 18% respectively and almost equal ratings of 13% and 15% as poor. Based on responses, in
this
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 particular
category
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, the rating was almost similar from
both
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 sides. Moving
further
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 with the remaining criteria, the information provided about the plays and performances to the public is 72% and 88% rated excellent by
club
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members
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 and the general public. In the same
category
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 23% and 10% respectively, rated it satisfactory,
whereas
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 a very small group of people from
both
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 sides rated it poor.
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, the next survey was about the facilities of the theatre, three-quarter of
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members
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 rated it excellent,
whereas
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, only 55% of the general public agreed. The
club
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members
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 and the general public
both
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 rated services as satisfactory with 23% and 19% respectively.
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, the most viable discrepancy can be in rating poor, where 26% of the general public was dissatisfied and only 2% of
members
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 of the
club
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 were on the same page.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words club, members, both, category with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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