The diagram shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly.

The diagram shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly.
The diagram illustrates the process of the lifecycle of a butterfly.
Overall
, the lifestyle of a butterfly is
cyclical
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a cyclical
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process that consists of the egg, larva(
caterpillar
), pupa( chrysalis) and the
adult
emerges,
then
completely
adult
life. First of all, eggs are laid on plants by the female
adult
butterfly. After a special period of time, the
caterpillar
leaves
his
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egg,
then
it feeds by eating plants to grow. Meanwhile, the larva usually
move
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slowly
,
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and has
benefit
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the benefit
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hiding
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around plants from birds or other big insects. When the
caterpillar
is
full
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grown, it steps to the next stage called chrysalis.
This
stage provides a gradual change for
caterpillar
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the caterpillar
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,
following
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by
its
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appears
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the
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legs, eyes,wings and other parts of
body
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the body
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. After that,
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adults
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adult
is emerged
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emerge
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from the process
chrysalis
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.
Then
,it becomes an
adult
butterfly with
colorful
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colourful
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wings and big eyes. The
adult
butterfly flies easily from place to place
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