The diagram shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly.
The diagram illustrates the process of the lifecycle of a butterfly.
Overall
, the lifestyle of a butterfly is cyclical
process that consists of the egg, larva(Add an article
a cyclical
caterpillar
), pupa( chrysalis) and the adult
emerges, then
completely adult
life.
First of all, eggs are laid on plants by the female adult
butterfly. After a special period of time, the caterpillar
leaves his
egg, Correct pronoun usage
its
then
it feeds by eating plants to grow. Meanwhile, the larva usually move
slowlyChange the verb form
moves
,
and has Remove the comma
apply
benefit
Correct article usage
the benefit
hiding
around plants from birds or other big insects.
When the Change preposition
of hiding
caterpillar
is full
grown, it steps to the next stage called chrysalis. Change the adjective
fully
This
stage provides a gradual change for caterpillar
, Correct article usage
the caterpillar
following
by Wrong verb form
followed
its
Change the word
the
appears
Replace the word
appearance
the
legs, eyes,wings and other parts of Change preposition
of the
body
. After that,Add an article
the body
Fix the agreement mistake
adults
adult
is emerged
from the process Wrong verb form
emerge
chrysalis
. Change preposition
of chrysalis
Then
,it becomes an adult
butterfly with colorful
wings and big eyes. The Change the spelling
colourful
adult
butterfly flies easily from place to placeSubmitted by dnm.best on
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