The diagram shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly.

The diagram illustrates the process of the lifecycle of a butterfly.

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, the lifestyle of a butterfly is

cyclical

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a cyclical

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process that consists of the egg, larva(

caterpillar

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), pupa( chrysalis) and the

adult

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emerges,

then

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completely

adult

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life. First of all, eggs are laid on plants by the female

adult

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butterfly. After a special period of time, the

caterpillar

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leaves

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egg,

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it feeds by eating plants to grow. Meanwhile, the larva usually

move

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slowly

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and has

benefit

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the benefit

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hiding

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of hiding

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around plants from birds or other big insects. When the

caterpillar

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is

full

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fully

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grown, it steps to the next stage called chrysalis.

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stage provides a gradual change for

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caterpillar

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the caterpillar

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,

following

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followed

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by

its

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appears

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the

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of the

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legs, eyes,wings and other parts of

body

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the body

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. After that,

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adults

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adult

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is emerged

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emerge

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from the process

chrysalis

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of chrysalis

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.

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,it becomes an

adult

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butterfly with

colorful

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colourful

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wings and big eyes. The

adult

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butterfly flies easily from place to place