The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

A glance at the graph illustrates that

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the bygone

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eating habits were healthier in comparison; but, as time passes a great deal larger of youngsters have had

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to eat fast foods.

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been boomed during

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interval; in comparison, the rate of eating

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food have been declined. First and foremost,

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the first year of

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almost no fast food was in

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meals of teenagers;

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each person

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has eaten fish roughly 100 times which is a magnificent number. gradually after 10

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decreased up to roughly 90 times;

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time, suddenly the facts and figures related to that have

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slumped to less than 40 times a year. Regarding the consumption of

hamburger

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and pizza, since 1975 young people started to eat

this kind

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of foods. In more

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, it became a trend. So

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, the rate of eating them

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rocketed. Generally eating

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had more fans,

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1985 was at the highest level and after

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it continued to grow with a gentle slope.

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1990, but after that it became steady.