The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.

The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.
The pie chart depicts how frequently adults in the USA do online shopping,
whereas
the bar chart contains information about their preferences
while
doing it in 2015.
Overall
, a fairly bigger number of people purchased from the
Internet
less often because the majority of them chose to buy things in the physical store. From the data, we can see that there are four types of online
buyers
in the USA (Weekly, A few times a month, less often, Never). 37 % of them do online shopping rarely,
while
less than a third choose to buy a few times monthly.
Furthermore
, people who are
also
known as weekly online purchasers accounted for less than a fifth.
However
, citizens who never experienced
internet
purchasing contributed by a fifth to the percentage. In terms of preference,
although
they are
also
internet
buyers
, the USA citizens are much more likely to consume things from the local shop. Excluding the weekly shoppers, it can be explained for the other three types of
buyers
. Of the weekly online
buyers
, more than three-fifths chose to buy from the local store. In the rest of the category; in terms of online purchasing, all online shoppers accounted for more than a
third,
while
monthly
internet
buyers
contributed to more than two-fifths of and less frequent online shoppers accounted for nearly a fifth.
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