The two maps below show road acces to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. To summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road acces to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

To summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These are maps that represent the changes made to the
road
leading to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
,
road
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roads
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became well organised and similar infrastructures were grouped in one location to make it easier for
road
users and the public to locate . To the north and South of the Hospital
Road
, two roundabouts were added one leading to City
Road
and the other, right at the gate of the facility. The three bus stops on either side of the hospital
road
have been linked to the roundabouts to make way for the new bus station just to the West and where the car park for both the workers and the public once stood, a park solely for the staff was retained. The entire structure of the hospital was not modified,
however
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to the east of the clinic, a large parking space for the general public was reserved .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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