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the charts show average levels of paticipation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore

the charts show average levels of paticipation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore
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The charts
Illustrates
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 the number of adult people that take
vairy
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vocational
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education
 and the highest
education
level
 in Singapore
on
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in
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 five categories
in
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from
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 2000 to 2010. The
level
 of
education
are
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is
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 measured in percentage.
Overall
, all people who
take
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took
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education
 over
ten
years
 was male which was almost
one to third
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one-third
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 more than
that
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apply
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of
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apply
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adult female and the lowest gender who
take
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took
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education
 was female. University degree was higher than that
the
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of the
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 other levels. In
term
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 of
average
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an average
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 number of
years
 spent at school adult males spent most at more than
ten
years
 but less than twelve
years
 in 2010. Compared to
other
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the other
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 gender which spent
at
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apply
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less than
ten
years
 in 2010.
In
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On
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 the other hand
highschool
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high school
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 qualification was the highest
level
 of
education
 at 32.13% in 2010 and it significantly decreased over
ten
years
 later
at
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to
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 19.55%. As opposed university qualification was higher at 32.93% in 2010. The lowest number of
education
level
 was
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the master
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master
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master's
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 qualification at 7.5% in 2000 and it increased almost four
time
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times
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 over
ten
years
at
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to
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 30.31% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, level, ten, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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