the charts show average levels of paticipation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore
The charts
Illustrates
the number of adult people that take Change the verb form
Illustrate
vairy
Correct word choice
vocational
education
and the highest education
level
in Singapore on
five categories Change preposition
in
in
2000 to 2010. The Change preposition
from
level
of education
are
measured in percentage.
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is
Overall
, all people who take
Wrong verb form
took
education
over ten
years
was male which was almost one to third
more than Correct your spelling
one-third
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
adult female and the lowest gender who Change preposition
apply
take
Wrong verb form
took
education
was female. University degree was higher than that the
other levels.
In Change preposition
of the
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
average
number of Change the article
an average
the average
years
spent at school adult males spent most at more than ten
years
but less than twelve years
in 2010. Compared to other
gender which spent Correct article usage
the other
at
less than Change preposition
apply
ten
years
in 2010. In
the other hand Change preposition
On
highschool
qualification was the highest Correct your spelling
high school
level
of education
at 32.13% in 2010 and it significantly decreased over ten
years
later at
19.55%. As opposed university qualification was higher at 32.93% in 2010.
The lowest number of Change preposition
to
education
level
was Correct article usage
the master
master
qualification at 7.5% in 2000 and it increased almost four Change noun form
master's
time
over Change to a plural noun
times
ten
years
at
30.31% in 2010.Change preposition
to
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