Technology has brought many changes in our lives, especially in the educaion system. One of these is the introduction of online studies. Is this a positive or negative dvelopment?   Give readons and examples from your personal opinion.

These days, the advancement of technology has been massively adapted in almost every

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of our

life

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, including in our education system. Online learning is one of them, and many people seem to predict that it will become more trendy in the future.

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my standpoint, online studies have both positive and negative consequences, and

this

essay will provide a balanced perspective

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it. Online learning provides an alternative teaching method for

teachers

, and a

syncronous

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synchronous

method is

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way

teachers

integrate their teaching with the help of technology devices even without even a need

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face-to-face interactions. During

COVID-19

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outbreak, online studies became the only solution to maintain

learning

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process even though

teachers

and

students

could not interact in the

class

at all

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social distancing policy. After the

pandemic

was over, massive online learning

movement

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movements such

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as massive open online courses (

MOOC

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)

such

as Coursera, Udemy,

EdX

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have become

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an additional learning to complement

students

to learn outside of the

class

.

Nevertheless

,

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of

students

seemed to experience difficulties

to adapt

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and

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during

massive

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the massive

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movement of online learning

in

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the beginning of

COVID-19

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the COVID-19

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pandemic

period. It took a

while

for

students

to see the benefits of online learning

although

they experienced that online learning is still less effective compared

learning

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in the

class

with direct teacher interactions. In post

pandemic

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era,

however

, online learning is still adapted in many schools and universities but it shifted with direct interactions namely hybrid methods, combining technology devices with

teachers

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existence in the

class

. In conclusion, online learning has become an alternative solution and helped

teachers

across the world to maintain

learning

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process during

COVID-19

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the COVID-19

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pandemic

even though many

students

struggled to adapt and engage with a new

teching

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teaching

method during that period.