The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country from 2000 to 2015.
The line chart demonstrates the causes of moving people away to the major cities of a country that are discovered during a query.
overall
, It can be seen that the main motivations related to education and job, even though, family and friends and adventure had a slight effect on this
circumstance.
It is evident that in 2000, 60000 individuals had left their nation due to
finding a job, these quantities dramatically increased during 5 years and it reached about 85000 people. Then
in 2010, we can see the rate at its peak at around 92000, Whereas
it decreased gradually in 2015 at
88000. The proportion of folks who relocated because of study soared during the 15 years and it has a joint highest with employment line.
Change preposition
to
However
, the figures illustrate two modest reasons which had joint lowest in 2000 at about 11000. The number of individuals who migrate to other cities to be close to their relatives consistently rose to 21000 and after 2010 its pace dropped and merely had around 1000 surge. Migrating to other towns due to
adventure steadily climbed and the number of folks in 2015 was approximately 15000.
To sum up
, we are informed by these data that, there were two major reasons for relocating people to capital cities that are employment and study. Furthermore
, other motivations such
as family and friends and traveling
impacted the rate of moving away.Change the spelling
travelling
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