The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The given maps indicate how the waterfront
area
of a
town
called Darwin was transformed from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the waterfront
area
had
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been greatly developed with the conversion of the industrial
area
into residential, recreational and academic facilities. Another notable feature is the appearance of a brand-new harbor which improved the transportation of the
area
. In 2009, the majority of the
town
was covered by the industrial
area
which was
then
demolished to make room for a number of trees and amenities. In the North, a part of the industrial zone was replaced by a
newly-built
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swimming pool,
while
there were no alterations to the school, convention center, and two swimming pools. In the
center
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of the waterfront
area
, there was
construction
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of three residential buildings, adjacent to the three previous ones.
In addition
, a university building was erected to the West of the
area
. With regard to access, in the seashore of the
town
, a
harbor
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was constructed. There was
also
construction
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of a footpath which connected the newly-constructed
harbor
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with the main road in the West of the
town
. Meanwhile, the footpath which encircled the
center
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of the
town
witnessed no changes.
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