The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates
that
Correct determiner usage
the
process
of the frog
's lifecycle in a pond. There are Correct article usage
a totally
totally
Replace the word
total
eleven
Change preposition
of eleven
stage
of Change to a plural noun
stages
process
from Add an article
the process
eggs
to an adult frog
.
Overall
from the
perspective, Correct determiner usage
this
eggs
are the first stage
of Correct article usage
the lifecyle
lifecyle
Correct your spelling
lifecycle
process
and enbryo
is the main Correct your spelling
embryo
stage
of this
process
.
The
Correct article usage
According
according to
the diagrams shows that, the
Correct article usage
apply
eggs
are the primary steps for the lifecycle process
then
eggs
will become embryo
. After that Fix the agreement mistake
embryos
ebryo
can be Correct your spelling
embryo
embryos
coverted
Correct your spelling
covered
into
the tadpoles clinging and Change preposition
by
this
located
in the water plant. The external gills breathing is the next Add a missing verb
is located
process
for this
cycle then
tail growing is the fifth stage
of this
lifecycle process
. Thereafter
, lives from food stored in the tail to survive and the tails
Fix the agreement mistake
tail
are becoming
shorter when it grows.
Wrong verb form
becomes
In addition
, the young forg
is the before final Correct your spelling
frog
for
stage
of this
process
then
the final step is the young frog
to become an adult frog
in a pond.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, frog, stage, eggs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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