The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004.

The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004.
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The graph below illustrates the
number
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of Asian elephants in 9
countries
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in 2 years.
Overall
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,
while
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there was a downward trend in some
countries
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, others experienced stability.
Whereas
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the least
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belonged to China, the opposite was seen in India. Starting with 10000, the total
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of Indian elephants was the highest, with 2500 more than Myanmar and over half of Thailand in 1997. After 7 years, three
countries
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also
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witnessed a decrease, [with which,] the drop in Thailand was the largest at 70%, followed by India at 25%, and a decline of 300, equal to 10%, in Myanmar.
On the other hand
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, Malaysia and Sri Lanka shared a similar
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of 3000 in 1997, followed by three Indochina
countries
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. Beginning at 1000, China was the lowest, which was
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(10%
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) of India.
However
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, in the next 7 years,
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Sri Lanka’s, Vietnam’s, Lao’s, and Cambodia’s elephant population stabilized, the opposite was seen in Malaysia with a plunge of 2000 and China with a 50% reduction equal to 1000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • decline
  • increase
  • drop
  • steady decrease
  • recover
  • habitat loss
  • poaching
  • efforts
  • protect
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