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In your letter: Tell the manager your decision and the reason Describe what you have learnt in your current job Ask the manager to write to you a reference letter. You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it . Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision.

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Dear Mr. Campbell, I am
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 graduated from my university and have got my bachelor's degree in the software development field. I am considering looking for a job in the IT sector, and I am going to leave the company in three to six months because I am eager to try my skills in a product development team as an ICT business analyst. Mr. Campbell ,thank you very much for your guidance. I have learned a bunch of demanding abilities
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 two years. I would like to ask you for help with a reference letter for my future employment. If you do not mind, I will send you the first draft next week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Prabh

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tone
Consider using a more formal tone throughout your letter, especially in the introduction.
structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. For example, separate your reasons for leaving into a distinct paragraph.
strength
Your enthusiasm for future opportunities in the IT sector comes through clearly, showing your ambition.
strength
You effectively express gratitude for the manager's support, which adds a personal touch to your letter.
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