The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002.
The given information presents us
the
number of three different calls in Change preposition
with the
United
Kingdom, from 1995-2002.
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the United
Overall
, local calls were the most popular whole period, in comparison with national and international and mobile calls, it is Wrong verb form
explained
explains
us that national/international and mobile calls were in Add the preposition
explains to
the
second and third place by spent Correct article usage
apply
minutes
.
According to
the chart, local calls had
fluctuated over the period, reaching 70 Unnecessary verb
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billions
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billion
of
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minutes
in 1995, then
peaking 90
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at 90
billions
and back to the outgoing Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 2002.
It is clear from the data, that national and international calls increased steadily , with just over 38 billion
minutes
in 1995 to total
Correct article usage
a total
42
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of 42
billion
times that
spentCorrect pronoun usage
apply
on
. Change preposition
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According to
the provided information, mobile calls had dramatic changes in comparison with two other calls, reaching almost 45 billion
times in 2002 from just 1 billion
minutes
in 1995. In addition
, we can see the sharp rise of
numbers in 2000 and 2001.Change preposition
in
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