modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures To what extent agree or disagree ===========================================

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At present, owing to advanced
technology
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people
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becoming
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social media,
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they would again both negative and positive impacts.
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appear considerably it has completely
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our life.
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life. I mean by
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platforms make the whole world
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a small village. Citizens could connect with other
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easily
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without
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time and money just by a click with attainable and without arduous even with relatives,
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from other countries.
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in another country.
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technology
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they will
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with their family even if by
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call or just sound.
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,
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drowback
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drawback
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a
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bad
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precise
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communities
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people
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aride
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against
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because they destroy their culture
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the other lifestyle.
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conclusion, social media has both advantages and disadvantages,
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however
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however,
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it seems to me because
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our minds
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more
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wider the advantages
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disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionize communication
  • global relationships
  • cultural exchange
  • cultural homogenization
  • diminish traditions
  • uniform global culture
  • cultural elements
  • dilute traditions
  • dominant languages
  • marginalizing
  • communication tools
  • cultural preservation
  • intercultural connectivity
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • positive and negative outcomes
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