the table gives information about the average hours spent in the Internet by European people of different age groups.

The table above shows the

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of

women

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and men of different ages who spend long hours on the

Internet

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in Europe. The most important point that draws attention is people between the ages of 16-20 are the ones who use the

Internet

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the most, as the

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of females has reached 18 and the

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of males is one more. From 21 onwards, it was found that the

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of male and female

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users began to decrease. From the age of 26 to 30, it was found that men and

women

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spend 4 hours on the

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, and

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amount is constant.

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the

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of

women

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spending their time on the

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began to increase in the remaining two stages of life,

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the

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of males began to decrease gradually, reaching 2,

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the

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of

women

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increased by one,

reached

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3 hours among people aged 51

above

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and above

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.

overall

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, it can be seen that the highest period of

internet

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usage for both

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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was the age range of 16

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20.