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the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate data
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 groups of populations based on the ages of
Yemen
 and Itlay in 2000 and 2050.
Overall
, it is seen that in
Yemen
age
groupof
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group
 15-59
percentage
 will increase and in Italy 60+
age
group
 population increase. In detail,
Yemen
's population in 2000.0-14
age
group
 proportion is the highest at 50.1% followed by 46.3% of 15-59% and the 60+
age
age
group
percentage
 is 3.6%.In the forecast of 2050,the
Yemen
 population will change dramatically.The 15-59
age
 class will have the highest percentage57.3% followed by the 0-14
age
group
 and 60+ will
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 37% and 5.7% respectively.
On the other hand
 ,Italy has the highest
percentage
 of the 15-59
age
group
While
 in 2050 it will decrease to 46.2%.The 60+
age
group
 was 24.1% in 2000 and will increase in 2050 to 42.3%.
However
,0-14 years
age
group
percentage
 will decrease from 14.3% to 11.5% from 2000 to 2050.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, age, percentage, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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