the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

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The charts provide the ratio of age percentages between two different countries over a fifty-year period.

Overall

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, children,

adults

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, and older populations experienced significant changes in Yamen and Italy.

To begin

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with, in Yamen in 2000 time, the increased data in children between 0-14 years old was 50,1%, and for

adults

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15-59

ages

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just different 5% from the percentages before.

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, for the

last

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one in older

ages

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, there was a dip of 3,6 %. Jump for the fifty-year next the first position changes from before which

adults

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rose 57,3%, and children fell in 37,0%, the

last

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ration stil

adults

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ages

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On the other hand

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, in Italy, between 2000 and 2050 it went up gradually in 15- 59 years at 61,0% and 46,2%, and older

ages

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were in second place at 24,1% and 42,3%

this

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number fise versa with Yemen in the lower number.

However

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, for the

last

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teenager, it falls dramatically, and the ratio of the differences is just 4%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, ages with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

162 words

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the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

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