the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
The charts provide the ratio of age percentages between two different countries over a fifty-year period.
Overall
, children,
adults
, and older populations experienced significant changes in Yamen and Italy.
To begin
with, in Yamen in 2000 time, the increased data in children between 0-14 years old was 50,1%, and for
adults
15-59
ages
just different 5% from the percentages before.
In addition
, for the
last
one in older
ages
, there was a dip of 3,6 %. Jump for the fifty-year next the first position changes from before which
adults
rose 57,3%, and children fell in 37,0%, the
last
ration stil
adults
ages
.
On the other hand
, in Italy, between 2000 and 2050 it went up gradually in 15- 59 years at 61,0% and 46,2%, and older
ages
were in second place at 24,1% and 42,3%
this
number fise versa with Yemen in the lower number.
However
, for the
last
teenager, it falls dramatically, and the ratio of the differences is just 4%.
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