The map shows a popular tourist destination in a city in 2000 and 2010.
The two maps depict some obvious and mild changes in comparison
of
the tourist destination in a metropolitan between 2000 and 2010.
Looking from an Change preposition
to
overall
perspective, it is evident that the underdeveloped area was modernized with more cutting-edge facilities and customer services.
In terms of radical shifts, the bare land in the northwest corner of the picture was converted into a guardrail over the 10-year period. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a toilet was designated in the place where the gift shop used to be, Linking Words
while
a cafe in the heart of the map was built in 2010. What's more, the parking and hotel were erected at the removal of the barren land.
With regard to mild changes, there was a barrier at the top of the graph built to separate the river and another side. Linking Words
Moreover
, the trees in the southwest were more cultivated from two trees to four trees. Linking Words
Finally
, no response detected records Linking Words
alternation
in a toilet in the northeast and the heritage railway to the right of the map.Change preposition
of alternation
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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