In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Due to

globalization and

majorly

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the

cities

are improving in terms of development and

facilities

across the world,

public

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are

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moving from rural

areas

to downtown. There are plenty of job opportunities as well and it attracts

family

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families

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to move to

cities

.

Overall

it is a negative development for the rural

areas

as there is no development

due to

a decrease in population and industries are not in a position to invest money in a low populated

areas

The main example if you see in down south of Tamilnadu, there is a rural place called Madurai where govt were planning to set up a steel manufacturing plant, They were not able to meet the labour force and ultimately it led to the shutdown

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a few years.

This

type of situation made people think and they started to move to

cities

and government

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not in a position to invest money in

facilities

like power , water and sewage

due to

fewer working

community

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communities

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and they may not pay tax On the other side, The

cities

are becoming very densely populated, and the rents and other basic amenities like water, food, and education

cost

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costs

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are increasing heavily

due to

this

. But the

facilities

like internet, roads, bridges, and parks are developed year after year. Companies are investing heavily in the

cities

where there is tremendous workforce. So

to conclude

, The population should be diversified and companies should start investing in rural

areas

where they can get cheap land and in a way it is beneficial for them to save cost. They must come up with an idea to develop smart rural

areas

, where all the

facilities

should be provided, So that the people won't migrate to

cities

.

This

will

also

in turn help the

cities

to avoid congestion.