Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is believed by some that

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important values, others

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that

zoos

have some tangible benefits.

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essay will delve into

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both points of view and my opinion will be illustrated.

To begin

with, some believe that

zoos

are very vital in order to save endangered animals. On account of pouching a lot of

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may be extinct in the near future. So as not to suffer from the given problem

zoos

are the best place to save and nurture them. Regarding leisure, a great number of children spend a great deal of time in

zoos

in their spare time.

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is because they capture photos with animals and feeding them

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some sort of fulfillment for the children.What's more, the natural atmosphere in the

zoos

contribute

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to some positive feelings because of

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air. To illustrate

this

, the public

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a great deal of time with

zoos

in procedure to expand their horizons and improve their stamina owing to healthy air. So as to the given justifications, in my country, four

zoos

were established in the

last

year.

Therefore

, it seems to me that

zoos

bring about positive impacts for both

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and youths.

However

, despite these, it was claimed by some that

zoos

it is not

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thing to prioritise. So, what the government has to do is remove them and other valuing things take their places. To illustrate

this

, because of population

growth

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there

are

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a lack of residential spots. To address

this

challenge

zoos

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spots have to be removed

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homes. When it comes to

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dilemma,the cost of nurturing these animals is very high

although

so

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many

countries suffer from inflation and debts, they offer high prices for

zoos

.

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can be

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in

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like taxes and weak

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. In spite of the aforementioned reasons, I am inclined to think neither.

According to

the given justifications in the first paragraph. In a nutshell, after a thorough analysis of

this

subject

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it's predicted that the advantages of

zoos

are

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outweigh

its

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disadvantages,

while

some believe that it doesn't

not

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have any sort of benefits.