The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The line graph depicts the regional household recycling percentage between 2005 and 2015 in countries,
such
as UK,
France
and Germany. Substantially, the rates in the UK and Germany increased over the given years,
although
France
ended up with the worst percentage. The countries with expansion had very similar statistics, even though had various percentages.
For instance
, they both had slight growth in 2009 and 2011. The onset in Germany was 20%, but
then
grew to approximately 55%. The United Kingdom rate multiplied by almost two times, which was 35% in 2005 and merely over 60% in 2015.
However
, the amount of household recycling in
France
plunged from 50% to nearly 30% between 2005 and 2013 years, despite
this
the division moderately grew in the following years. In conclusion,
France
had the worst rates in 2015, even though at the starting point it was top-notch.
Also
, the UK raised its household recycling rates the most.
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  • household recycling rates
  • regional
  • line graph
  • countries
  • between
  • overall trends
  • changes
  • compare
  • ten-year period
  • differences
  • reasons
  • summarize
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