The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The graph depicts the percentages of average recycling by family in an area in the UK, France, and Germany from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the trend of people reusing trash in the area in the UK and Germany increased significantly,
However
, surprisingly, France was a leader in that field in the early period and must drop to the end place
at the end
of the decade. The UK was a country with a positive trend for rates of house recycling in the recent decade. From around 35 per cent in 2005
then
grew to just above 60% in 2015. France started with the highest level
than
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the other countries,
on the other hand
, the average of people recycling their staff in a field saw a remarkable drop
although
able to recover in the
last
period. Lead double over Germany in 2005, the percentages of family reused garbage decreased dramatically by 20 per cent in 2013
then
recovered to almost 40% in 2 years. Surprisingly, the Dutch had the worst start in 2005 and became 2nd rank 10 years later. In the
last
period, the average of reutilized trash by people in a house rose sharply over triple to over 55%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household recycling rates
  • regional
  • line graph
  • countries
  • between
  • overall trends
  • changes
  • compare
  • ten-year period
  • differences
  • reasons
  • summarize
  • comment
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