The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph gives information on how many tourists came to crouse ships,
islands
and in total rate during the period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.
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and islands
Overall
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it is clear that
there was a gradual increase in the number of Linking Words
visitors
belonging to all units in the given period. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the figure for the total rate was the highest among all the provided categories.
It is obviously seen from the figures that, the amount of tourists on crouse ships started its popularity with around 0,7 Linking Words
million
people, compared to about 0,2 Use synonyms
million
on the island in 2010. The proportion of Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the cruise ship went up to roughly 1,7 Use synonyms
million
in 2012, despite remaining unchanged in 2011, Use synonyms
while
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visitors
on the island went up to 0,5 Use synonyms
million
in 2011, before having a drop to 0,2 Use synonyms
million
in the next year. The rate of people who stayed on the island saw little fluctuations in the next half decade and eventually, it reached 1,5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017. Use synonyms
This
trend on crouse ships climbed up until 2017 when it reached Linking Words
to
its peak point ( 2 Change preposition
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million
)
In terms of total number which was the highest among the given groups, it had a Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
at the beginning of the period. Until the end of the provided time, it continued to grow and in 2017, it rose to 3,5 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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