The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
The given flow chart illustrates how orange
juice
is produced.
Overall
, it is, generally, clear that juice
is manufactured 2 distinct stages: making freshly squeezed juice
and producing treated juice
. The process commencing with picking up fresh oranges
and culminating with delivering to the shops.
Looking at the image in more detail, initially
, fresh oranges
are harvested from trees and then
harvested fresh oranges
are delivered to the factory. Next,
delivered oranges
are washed and they are extracted 2 parts: waste solid and fresh juice
. Waste solid is used for animal feed. It is also
evident that fresh juice
are divided two patterns. First way is that packaging fresh juice
and they are delivered to the shops.
Second way is that fresh juice
is delivered evaporation by refrigerator truck. In evaporation, fresh juice
is extracted from water. This
juice
is called "concentrate juice
". Following
this
, concentrate juice
is canned. After that, canned juice
is kept in the warehouse and then
delivered to the factory. In the factory, water is added juice
. Finally
, This
juice
are packaged and carried to the shopsSubmitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words juice, oranges with synonyms.
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