The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
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The given flow chart illustrates how orange
juice
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is produced.
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, it is, generally, clear that
juice
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is manufactured 2 distinct stages: making freshly squeezed
juice
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and producing treated
juice
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. The process commencing with picking up fresh
oranges
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and culminating with delivering to the shops. Looking at the image in more detail,
initially
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, fresh
oranges
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are harvested from trees and
then
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harvested fresh
oranges
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are delivered to the factory.
Next,
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delivered
oranges
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are washed and they are extracted 2 parts: waste solid and fresh
juice
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. Waste solid is used for animal feed. It is
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evident that fresh
juice
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are divided two patterns. First way is that packaging fresh
juice
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and they are delivered to the shops. Second way is that fresh
juice
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is delivered evaporation by refrigerator truck. In evaporation, fresh
juice
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is extracted from water.
This
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juice
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is called "concentrate
juice
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".
Following
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this
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, concentrate
juice
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is canned. After that, canned
juice
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is kept in the warehouse and
then
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delivered to the factory. In the factory, water is added
juice
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.
Finally
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,
This
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juice
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are packaged and carried to the shops
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words juice, oranges with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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