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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The given graph illustrates the number of people who are over 65 years old in three disparate countries from 1940 to 2040. It is clearly evident that the USA was the most popular
country
 with eight
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 in 1940. Until 1980, the USA had a considerable increase to 15
percent
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 but experienced a moderate decline until 2020 when its population fell slightly to about 13
percent
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Finally
,
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this
 ratio is going to grow to approximately 23
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 in 2040.
Moreover
, Sweden was the second most
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popular
country
 with about 3
percent
in1940
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. Despite
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some fluctuation,
this
country
's old society
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nowadays
 is about 18
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 and it is going to increase to 25
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 in 2040.
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Finally
, Japan had the fewest population of up
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 years with merely five
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, and
this
 ratio
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continues
 until 1990, but after that the older community
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 to 10
percent
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 until 2024. Meanwhile,
this
 proportion will reach a peak at 27
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 in 2040. In conclusion, the USA was a
country
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 majority of old people, but is going to be the lowest, unlike Japan which has the fewest society of old people, but it is going to be the highest one.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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