The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates the number of shop openings and closures in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the highest trend
of opening shops
happened in 2011, while
the highest trend
of closures happened in 2013.
Firstly
, the trend
of opening new shops
decreased from 2011 to 2018. It started from opening around 7.500 shops
, then
reduced to only opening around 3.000 shops
in 2018. The trend
kept decreasing until there was only a half compared to the beginning. Furthermore
, the only time when there was a little bit of increase was from 2012 to 2014, from about 4.000 shops
to around 6.000 shops
.
Similarly
, the trend
of closing shops
also
declined within the same years. In 2011, there were around 6.500 shops
that were being closed. However
, at the end
of the period, the closure only happened at 5.000 shops
. In addition
, the lowest closure hit occurred in 2015, with only around 500 shops
closed.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trend, shops with synonyms.
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