The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Write at least 150 words. You may spend 20 minutes to complete the task
The bar chart shows a comparison of five different expenditure areas in
France
and the UK
in 2010. Overall
, it was recorded that both these nations spent the most money on cars
, whereas
, the most significant expenditure gap was apparent in cameras.
Relatively more money was spent by the UK
on cars
, books, and cameras than in France
. The
first category which is Change preposition
In the
cars
, the UK
spent just over 450,000 pounds
, by contrast
, France
used about 55,000 pounds
less. For books, the expenditure gap was widened, but countries expended less than they did on cars
: approximately 400,000 and 300,000 pounds
for the UK
and France
, respectively. The margin in spending was the largest for cameras, with the figures for France
being more than twice smaller (150,000 pounds
) than that for the UK
(slightly over 35,000 pounds
).
However
, France
's expense
on Replace the word
expenditure
computer
and perfume was higher than the Fix the agreement mistake
computers
UK
's. About 380,000 pounds
was spent by France
on computers as opposed to 350,000 pounds
by the UK
, but the amounts for perfume were a lot lower with the respective number
of 200,000 and just under 150,000 Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
pounds
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