The Chart shows the number of visitors to a local cinema according to age in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates the

quantity

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number

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of individuals who visited a

neighborhood

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cinema categorized by age in the year 2000.

Overall

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, it seems that the number of people who went to the cinema tended to decrease steadily

according to

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age from 10 to 45, and increased dramatically from 55 onwards. The visitors’ group of

ages

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31-45 were very low,

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the

ages

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55 and older were significant. Speaking of the age 10 - 45, the proportion of individuals demerited noticeably. Children were interested more than adults, the

ages

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10-15 comprised highest with 21 per cent. The group of

ages

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from 16 to 45 tended not to go to the cinema frequently so the percentage dropped sharply, only 5 per cent of

ages

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31-45. Regarding old people (

ages

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55 and older), they went to movie

theatre

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theatres

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more than young people. The chart showed the old covered over a half (51 per cent). It seems that they were fascinated and

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the proportion of them

were

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outstanding

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more outstanding

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than other groups.