An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - offer to find somewhere to stay - give advice about what to do - give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Rita, I hope you are doing well. I am delighted to learn that you are planning to visit India for two weeks. I am more than happy to welcome you to our country. I know that you may be thinking of finding accommodation, but not to worry as we have a beautiful guest house located near my home and I will ensure it is available on the day of your arrival. If you don't mind, I would suggest you collect information about the places of interest that you are planning to visit during your stay in

this

country, which will help you to organise your trip within the limited time.

Furthermore

, please bring lighter clothes as you know it is summer here so the weather is perfectly fine as it is warm and bright making it suitable for sightseeing. I must say that you are coming at the right time and I am eagerly waiting to see you. Convey my regards to Mom and Dad. See you soon in India. yours lovely, Jee

Submitted by jeeanay on Sun Dec 03 2023

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Task Achievement

Be precise with your suggestions. The letter should provide more specific information on activities to do and places to visit. Ensure each paragraph introduces separate ideas clearly.

Coherence and Cohesion

Work on paragraphing; group related information together for better flow. Use a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., however, therefore, moreover) to improve the logical sequence of your ideas.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

174 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - offer to find somewhere to stay - give advice about what to do - give information about what clothes to bring

Q. An increase in production of consumer goods results in damaging the environment. What are the causes of this and give a possible solution?

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some people think that giving aid to the poor countries has more negative than positive impact to what extent do you agree or disagree?