Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

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Hello, my dear friend. It was so happy coincidence that we had our vacation at the same time, so I could be useful to you. Unfortunately, I'

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leaving home at 9 p.

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. on Friday, and your flight arrives at 10 p.

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., so we couldn't see each other. But for sure, I'll write you detailed instructions. First of all, my flat. It's a pretty one-bedroom apartment, kitchen with stove and dishwasher,

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, there is a laundry inside. You can use all of the kitchen devices,

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dishes. You will find the key in the mailbox, it's opening with the code 1971. On your

last

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day, you have to put the key back in the mailbox.

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, we have a small gym and a swimming pool, which you can use, I settled it with the service company. I hope it's clear that you don't need to pay for it. If you have some problems, you can talk to the service company office, they work from 9 a.

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to 4 p.

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. You can see their phone number printed on the door. Looking forward to seeing you. Best regards, Anastassia

anastasiaThu Aug 15 2024

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability.

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Add a bit more detail about what to do in case of an issue, such as giving an example.

coherence cohesion

Good overall structure, with clear sections for each part of the task.

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Friendly and welcoming tone, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

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