Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

Hello, my dear friend. It was so happy coincidence that we had our vacation at the same time, so I could be useful to you. Unfortunately, I'
m
leaving home at 9 p.
m
. on Friday, and your flight arrives at 10 p.
m
., so we couldn't see each other. But for sure, I'll write you detailed instructions. First of all, my flat. It's a pretty one-bedroom apartment, kitchen with stove and dishwasher,
moreover
, there is a laundry inside. You can use all of the kitchen devices,
as well as
dishes. You will find the key in the mailbox, it's opening with the code 1971. On your
last
day, you have to put the key back in the mailbox.
Furthermore
, we have a small gym and a swimming pool, which you can use, I settled it with the service company. I hope it's clear that you don't need to pay for it. If you have some problems, you can talk to the service company office, they work from 9 a.
m
to 4 p.
m
. You can see their phone number printed on the door. Looking forward to seeing you. Best regards, Anastassia
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coherence cohesion
Good overall structure, with clear sections for each part of the task.
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Friendly and welcoming tone, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.
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