The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia

The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia
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The table shows the
number
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of marital statuses, with approval from religion and civil, and the
number
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of brides and bridegrooms classified by age in Australia between 1960 and 2000.
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, proven by religion marriage led the
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over a 40-year
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, except in the year 2000,
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the bridegroom's
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was higher than the bride’s one during the same
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. From 1960 to 1980, the
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of civilians in Australia, who were married by religion was triple times higher than those, being married by civilian approval.
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started to decline to 32.000 in 1990, but it is still popular in Australia.
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, in 2000, the
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of civil marriages surpassed the
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of married by religious by 6000 inhabitants. For the proportion of age,
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both bride and bridegroom numbers increased steadily in the given
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. the
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of bridegrooms took dominance with a slight gap between 2 and 3 in the given
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Evolution
  • Trend
  • Cultural shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Societal changes
  • First marriage
  • Contributing factors
  • Education
  • Career opportunities
  • Societal norms
  • Personal independence
  • Gender differences
  • Disparities
  • Legal age
  • Access to education
  • Implications
  • Family structure
  • Childbearing
  • Population demographics
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