the charts bellow show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

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washing machines,

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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, and vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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, and

time consuming

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consumption

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in

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housework in households in one country from 1920 to 2019. The units are measured in

percentage

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of households per

year

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and

number

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of

hours

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per

week

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every

year

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.

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, it can be clearly seen that electrical

appliances

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owners were increasing dramatically,

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the

number

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of

times

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time

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spent on housework was declining gradually. The first line graph depicts trends

of

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electrical

appliances

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ownership. In 1920, there were no households

who

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owned a refrigerator, but the following

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these ownerships

were soaring

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and

reach

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reached

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the

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peak in 1980 at 100

percent

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then

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remain

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steady until 2019. Vacuum cleaners stood at 30

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percent

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in 1920

then

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rise

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moderately and reached 100

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percent

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and unchanged in 2019.

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, washing machines started

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highest

percentage

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compared with others, at 40

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percent

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per cent

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in 1920 and

be

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the highest

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in 1940.

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1960, it had the same

percentage

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with

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vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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at 70

percent

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. Even though witnessed a decline in 1980 at around 65

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percent

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per cent

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, it bounced back to

rose

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and

reach

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reached

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at

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above 70

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percent

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in 2019. Meanwhile, the

number

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of

hours

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per

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decreased gradually from the initial

year

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until 2019. Stood at 50

hours

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per

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in 1920 and in 1960 the

number

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of

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fell more than half.

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, in 1980 the

hours

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remain

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steady to 2019 at just above 10

hours

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per

week

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.