The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about how
people
access the
news
in two
give
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countries,
Canada
and
Australia
.
Overall
, the majority of citizens of both countries prefer to watch
news
online and
from
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on
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TV. It can be seen that over a half
percent
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per cent
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of
Austrilians
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Australians
are likely to access the
news
online and 36%
percent
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per cent
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of
Canada
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residents prefer
this
way too .
On the other hand
,
people
from
Canada
and
Australia
watch the
news
on TV, with trends
40
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of 40
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% and 36%, respectively.
Also
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7
percent
of Australians like to read printed
news
,
similarly
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the same percentage of
people
in
Canada
listen to
news
on Radio, but citizens who read are 2 times more than in
Australia
. A mere 2
percent
of
people
in
Australia
hear the
news
from Radio and the same amount of citizens didn’t specify their
news
accession.In
Canada
, a portion of the population did not specify how they
obtain
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obtained
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their
news
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, news, canada, australia, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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