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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about how
people
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 access the
news
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 in two
give
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 countries,
Canada
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 and
Australia
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.
Overall
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, the majority of citizens of both countries prefer to watch
news
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 online and
from
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on
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 TV. It can be seen that over a half
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percent
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per cent
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 of
Austrilians
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Australians
 are likely to access the
news
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 online and 36%
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percent
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per cent
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 of
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Canada
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Canadian
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 residents prefer
this
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 way too .
On the other hand
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,
people
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 from
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 watch the
news
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 on TV, with trends
40
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of 40
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% and 36%, respectively.
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Also
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Also,
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 7
percent
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 of Australians like to read printed
news
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,
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similarly
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similarly,
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 the same percentage of
people
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 in
Canada
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 listen to
news
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 on Radio, but citizens who read are 2 times more than in
Australia
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. A mere 2
percent
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 of
people
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 in
Australia
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 hear the
news
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 from Radio and the same amount of citizens didn’t specify their
news
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 accession.In
Canada
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, a portion of the population did not specify how they
obtain
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obtained
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 their
news
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, news, canada, australia, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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