he diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing dragon fruit and pineapple products.

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The illustration presents an overview of key stages involved in the production of

dragon

fruit from three main steps, namely preparation, processing and packaging. The whole process of

dragon

fruit starts when many

dragon

fruits

are exposed to the sun drying process which allows it to be naturally dried for 7 months. After

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these

dragon

fruits

are steeped in chemicals for 5 months in order to become suitable

dragon

fruits

which weigh 2 kg and are 30 cm tall.

Following

this

dragon

fruits

are washed in water to remove any undesirable dirt and they will be distributed to three sizes,

such

as large, medium and small size, which are used for other purposes. With regard to medium and small sizes, these

dragon

fruits

will be cut and peeled off the skin but they are utilized for two aims.

While

medium sized

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dragon

fruits

are passed to an extraction which

make

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become

dragon

fruits smoothie

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small sized

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of these are pressed into juice and bottled.

Besides

wax

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will be coated on the outside of

large sized

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dragon

fruits

, which can protect them against any environmental changes.

As a result

, they are packaged in the container and delivered by ships.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

200 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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he diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing dragon fruit and pineapple products.

Nowadays the trend of eating ready made food is increasing. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages ot this outweigh the disadventages