Write a refer letter to school psychologist
I am writing to refer
Alison
Copper who requires your support and assessment. She is suspected of having grief related
or other psychological problems.
Add a hyphen
grief-related
Alison
started her school
well however
, since her grade 3. She has had difficulty in concentration ,rarely participates Add the comma(s)
, however
in class
activity and avoid sports activity. She Add a hyphen
in-class
was
started to decline her Unnecessary verb
apply
school work
. Her few friends Correct your spelling
schoolwork
is
often teased about her eczema and weight.
Her mother Change the verb form
are
contacted
by Add a missing verb
was contacted
class
teacher about her issues. She said that Add an article
a class
the class
Alison
is also
becoming withdrawn at home and she is often crying due to
her father's death.
Alison
5 years old
student Replace the word
is a 5-year-old
and
lives with her mother and is working as a bank manager. Her Correct word choice
who
school
health record shows that she has regular absence
Fix the agreement mistake
absences
due to
recurrent minor illness
. Her father died in Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
motor
accident 18 Add an article
a motor
month
ago.
I would highly appreciate Change to a plural noun
months
if
you could take over the assessment of Correct pronoun usage
it if
Alison
and help her to cope up
with the situation.
If you have any queries, don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours faithfully
Change preposition
apply
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the structure of the letter follows a clear and logical sequence, and that there is a coherent flow of ideas throughout.
coherence cohesion
Avoid including multiple ideas within a single paragraph; ensure that each paragraph contains one clear main idea.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task fully to ensure a higher score on task achievement.
task achievement
Maintain a formal and professional tone throughout the letter, appropriate for the context of referring a student to a school psychologist.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.