Write a refer letter to school psychologist

I am writing to refer
Alison
Copper who requires your support and assessment. She is suspected of having
grief related
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or other psychological problems.
Alison
started her
school
well
however
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, since her grade 3. She has had difficulty in concentration ,rarely participates
in class
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in-class
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activity and avoid sports activity. She
was
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started to decline her
school work
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schoolwork
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. Her few friends
is
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are
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often teased about her eczema and weight. Her mother
contacted
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by
class
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a class
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teacher about her issues. She said that
Alison
is
also
becoming withdrawn at home and she is often crying
due to
her father's death.
Alison
5 years old
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student
and
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who
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lives with her mother and is working as a bank manager. Her
school
health record shows that she has regular
absence
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absences
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due to
recurrent minor
illness
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illnesses
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. Her father died in
motor
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a motor
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accident 18
month
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months
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ago. I would highly appreciate
if
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it if
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you could take over the assessment of
Alison
and help her to cope
up
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apply
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with the situation. If you have any queries, don't hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully
School
nurse
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the structure of the letter follows a clear and logical sequence, and that there is a coherent flow of ideas throughout.
coherence cohesion
Avoid including multiple ideas within a single paragraph; ensure that each paragraph contains one clear main idea.
task achievement
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task achievement
Maintain a formal and professional tone throughout the letter, appropriate for the context of referring a student to a school psychologist.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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