Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smart phones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Due to
the development of technology, many families permit their children
to use smart gadgets for studying. This
essay will argue that the advantages of children
studying through tablets and smartphones outweigh any drawbacks.
Children
can learn and get the lessons easily by using tablets. To explain further
, it can be seen that, in this
era,the internet is an extremely rich repository of knowledge, there are some colourful lessons with a lot of interesting sound effects which can help children
be more excited about studying, more creative and remember them clearly. They can find any information and approach new methods of education soon. For example
, on YouTube, children
can learn maths or English through songs or cartoons. Hence
, this
is one of the good ways that a lot of families apply it.
Additionally
, not only helps the children
have more motivation to study but also
helps the parents save time and money. That is
to say, parents do not have to spend an amount of money to rent babysitters or tutors to teach their children
. Moreover
, they can also
be closer to their children
by studying and playing together because recently many games are both educational and entertaining to help families stay together.
In conclusion, the benefits which permitting children
to use tablets and smartphones as a useful resource of knowledge and saving parents’ money clearly outweigh any disadvantages associated with them.Submitted by 11E4 Community on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...