Living in a country where you have to speake a forigen language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living in a region where you can not speak your original
language
can cause serious issues, as well as
practical problems. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement because this
would make the person interested to learn
a new Change preposition
in learning
language
and exploring new cultures
.
Firstly
, living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language
would make you interested in get
a new Change the verb form
getting
language
. In other words
, everyone can not communicate with other society
unless he or she knows some of their languages. Fix the agreement mistake
societies
For example
, many people nowadays choose to emigrate to another country where they can live a better lifestyle. However
, they find themselves in a different community with a different language
, and because of this
, learning their language
would provide them with better opportunities.
Another point is that living in a foreign nation would give people the chance to explore other cultures
whatever their languages are. To put simply, staying in a different environment with different habits and customs might make the person gain some knowledge about other countries. For instance
, people who love travelling around the world have got much information from many cultures
in the world. Hence
, living abroad has many benefits even if cannot
speak a foreign Correct pronoun usage
one cannot
language
.
To sum up
, as I said, I disagree with living in a nation where you have to speak a foreign language
can infleuence
serious social problems and practical issues, Correct your spelling
influence
this
is because it might make the person interested in learning new languages and also
explore new cultures
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