Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Over the

last

Linking Words

two or three decades, technology

helps

Wrong verb form

has helped

show examples

people

Use synonyms

live

Replace the word

lives

show examples

easier

Add a missing verb

be easier

show examples

than ever before in many ways.

However

Linking Words

, some claim that social

media

Use synonyms

affects the population's

relationship

Use synonyms

at present. I agree that social

media

Use synonyms

affects socializing with others

along with

Linking Words

lack

Correct article usage

a lack

show examples

of affection between the

realtionship

Correct your spelling

relationships

This

Linking Words

essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

Linking Words

with,

people

Use synonyms

do not like to interact with their

closed

Replace the word

show examples

relatives

Change preposition

apply

show examples

directly

instead

Linking Words

of talking

with

Change preposition

show examples

social platforms because they have more

interest

Replace the word

interested

show examples

to use

Change preposition

in using

show examples

social

medias

Correct your spelling

media

show examples

in order to

get

Verb problem

make

show examples

enormous

friends

Use synonyms

, not only locals but

also

Linking Words

foreigners,

as a result

Linking Words

, socializing

Change preposition

with

show examples

others

is existed

Change to the active voice

exists

has existed

show examples

Linking Words

This

Change the determiner

These

show examples

social platforms give more and more

entertainments

Fix the agreement mistake

entertainment

show examples

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

comapred

Correct your spelling

compared

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

relationship

Use synonyms

like likes and comments

Change preposition

apply

show examples

around the world,

therefore

Linking Words

people

Use synonyms

like to get more comments from

unknown

Add an article

an unknown

show examples

person

Fix the agreement mistake

people

show examples

besides

Linking Words

their

realtives

Correct your spelling

relatives

or loved ones.

For example

Linking Words

, the youth generation

Change the verb form

does

show examples

not talk to their

realtives

Correct your spelling

relatives

when they come to their house

Linking Words

while

Correct word choice

and

show examples

they cannot out and say hello to them because they do not have

interest

Change the article

the interest

show examples

to talk

Change preposition

in talking

show examples

directly rather than virtually. So,

socisl

Correct your spelling

social

medias

Correct your spelling

media

show examples

always impact public

Use synonyms

relationship

Fix the agreement mistake

relationships

show examples

undoubtedly.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, mankind cannot express their love

between

Change preposition

show examples

Use synonyms

relationship

Fix the agreement mistake

relationships

show examples

because their focus

only

Add a missing verb

is only

show examples

to get

Change preposition

on getting

show examples

friends

Use synonyms

Change preposition

show examples

social

medias

Correct your spelling

media

show examples

Change preposition

apply

show examples

around the world. Mankind

always

Add a missing verb

is always

show examples

ready to give and receive love from

unknown

Add an article

an unknown

show examples

person

besides

Linking Words

their relatives which means they can find

friends

Use synonyms

who

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

similar thoughts and ideas from social

media

Use synonyms

but

this

Linking Words

is impossible to expect

between

Change preposition

show examples

relationship

Use synonyms

For instance

Linking Words

Indian

Correct article usage

the Indian

show examples

young generation

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

friends

Use synonyms

Change preposition

show examples

Facebook but most

friends

Use synonyms

belongs

Change the verb form

belong

show examples

to other nations. So, social

media

Use synonyms

affects

people

Use synonyms

realtinship

Correct your spelling

relationship

relationships

negatively. In conclusion, social

media

Use synonyms

affects socializing with others and lack of

affetcion

Correct your spelling

interaction

between loved ones

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

show examples

the crucial adverse impact

Change preposition

show examples

the

realtionship

Correct your spelling

relationship

. I strongly agree with

this

Linking Words

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

Linking Words

situation should alter that

people

Use synonyms

should adhere

Use synonyms

Change preposition

to relationship

show examples

relationship

Fix the agreement mistake

relationships

show examples

Change preposition

apply

show examples

directly.

reanudeepanMon Dec 04 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Make sure your essay has a clear logical structure, with each paragraph following logically from the preceding one. Aim to have distinct and well-organized paragraphs, each with a single main idea that relates to the task.

coherence cohesion

Your introduction and conclusion should clearly reflect the main points of your essay. Make sure the conclusion summarizes your main points effectively without introducing new ideas.

coherence cohesion

Support each main point with clear, relevant examples and details. Avoid overly general statements; use specific evidence or instances to back up your points.

task achievement

Your response must fully address all parts of the task. Clearly express your opinion and elaborate on how it's supported by the essay content, ensuring that you remain on topic throughout your response.

task achievement

Your ideas should be expressed clearly and comprehensibly. Work on clearer sentence structures and avoid grammatical errors that may obscure the meaning.

task achievement

Include relevant, specific examples to illustrate your points. Generalizations should be avoided in favor of detailed evidence that directly relates to the argument you are making.

14
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
54
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

321 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recent arguments have shown that several people think universities should make a rule that requires majors to accept their students based on gender, equally for men and women. However, I am against this idea because of certain reasons that will be explored more in this essay.
7
band
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common view that only big corporations and governments have resources to reverse the harmful effects caused to our environment and individual effort cannot make a big difference. However, this essay strongly disagrees with this viewpoint and suggests that individuals can make a huge impact in improving the environment through their small individual actions as well as with their collective effort.
7.5
band
Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
Whilst many individuals like travelling and seeking new adventures as a way of challenging themselves, there is a group that refuses to leave their comfort zone. In my opinion, having new experiences is essential if someone wants to improve his interpersonal skills.
8
band
Write an essay that summarizes and evaluates the key points of both texts. Use your own words to the extent
When you examine the topics “Shifing sand: Behavioural Change” and “Follow My Leader?”, you can see how generational differences and social expectations are evident in our social context.
6.5
band
Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there is an ongoing debate about whether the fact that young people of all ages ought to have more accountabilities such as helping at home or at work, or whether children should be free to enjoy their lives without extra responsibilities outside of school. While the latter is valid to some extent, I would regard myself as an advocate of the former.

Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Write an essay that summarizes and evaluates the key points of both texts. Use your own words to the extent

Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.