The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
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used for three different purposes in six areas of the world.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the developed country uses more
water
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for the industry.
However
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, the undeveloped country has the highest rate of agriculture.
To begin
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with, North America and Europe accounted for the largest amount of
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that was used in industry, which is 48% and 53% respectively,
while
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it is only 13% and 15% for domestic use. The
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for farming is the middle of the number, which is 39% and 32% in North America and Europe.
On the other hand
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, South America depends on agriculture for life so the proportion of liquid is over 70%.
Moreover
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, the usage of
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for farming in Asia and Africa is beyond 80%, which means people need to work hard,
whereas
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the amount of consumed
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for industrial work is the lowest in Africa and Central Asia, which is 7% and 5% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • predominant
  • variance
  • agricultural irrigation
  • residential consumption
  • industrial processes
  • environmental impact
  • economic factors
  • cultural practices
  • government policies
  • sustainability
  • conservation
  • trend analysis
  • resource management
  • efficiency
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