The chart and the table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarize the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided bar chart and table share medical resources and

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data across various nations.

Overall

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, the first vertical bar chart shows the comparison of hospital beds among 8 observed countries which

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lead with a clear gap.

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to that,

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is the best country set side by side with the Netherlands and the US, with the longest

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despite spending the least healthcare cost, with evidence clearly presented in the second table. In detail, the first figure displays that

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has the first rank in hospital bed numbers at 14 per thousand people, followed by Germany in the second position with 8. Both countries are leading comfortably compared to the other 6 countries: Australia, Canada, Netherlands, Spain, United Kingdom, and the United States which only recorded almost the same number at an average of 4. Indicating the different statistics, the data tabulation clearly states that

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has another great quality of healthcare by having the best average

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expectancy

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(83) with the lowest money spent per person around USD 2,500.

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, the United States, which spent more than twice the resources, could not even achieve a

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of 80 (78). The

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country, the Netherlands is placed in the middle for both categories, with approximately USD 3,500 in healthcare expenditure with 80 years of

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