The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
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The table illustrates the income of teachers in secondary high
school
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in five countries namely: Australia,
Denmark
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, Luxembourg, Korea and
Japan
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in the
year
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2019.
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, all of the schools listed saw an increase trend in salaries. In
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Denmark
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Denmark,
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it took the
least
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last
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year
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to become a top salary compared to Luxembourg which took a long period of time.
Teachers
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salaries in
Denmark
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began
with
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47,000$ which was higher than
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in Australia
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Australia
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Australia's
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(34,600$) and it took 8
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year
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years
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to reach the maximum of 54,000$.
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, Australia and
Denmark
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lecturers received 48,000$ and 54,000$ per
year
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.
Japan
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and
Korea
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Korea's
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income start with 28,000$ and 30,500$, respectively and these
was
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maximized at 62,000$ and 84,500$. In
additon
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Japan
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Japan,
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it took 34 years to reach the maximum which is 3 years less than
Japan
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.
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, in
Luxemberg
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Luxembourg
the beginning income was 80,000 and maximized at 139,000 and it took 30 years to reach the highest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words denmark, japan, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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