The line graph shows visits to and from UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line chart illustrates how many
visitors
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to and from the
UK
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between 1979 and 1999,
while
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the bar chart shows the
number
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of
UK
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residents visiting five different
countries
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(Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, and France), measured by millions.
Overall
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, the
number
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of overseas
visitors
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and those
traveling
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abroad both gradually increased.
Moreover
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,
UK
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residents prefer to visit France among other
countries
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. Regarding the line chart, the total
UK
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residents who went overseas had a higher
number
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than foreign
visitors
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throughout the period. Despite an almost similar starting
number
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(10
million
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) in 1979, British
visitors
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grew significantly to over 50
million
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in twenty years.
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, the
number
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of foreign
visitors
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who came to the
UK
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doubled in the final year. Turning to preferred
countries
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destination, France was the most popular place with almost 11
million
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visitors
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. The
number
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has a slight difference with people coming to Spain for almost 10
million
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. The remaining
countries
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(Turkey, Greece, and the USA) had less than 5
million
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UK
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visitors
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in 1999.
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