The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the layout of the typical working space in the US and Japan.
Overall
, the design of the Japanese
office
only has three main areas to encourage employees to discuss and share with each other,
while
that of the US is divided into many areas to support the workers' privacy.
In addition
, the typical working space in Japan has lower windows and doors than that of the US. The Japanese
office
has two identical areas, with each having one desk for the section manager and six positions for employees. The position of the department manager is located behind
this
area to supervise his or her staff easily.
Conversely
, the US
office
consists of eight independent desks which are located in the centre. The section and department managers sit in the private corners which side on the right of the working space, helping them improve their ability
of
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concentration
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. The typical
office
in Japan only has one window and two doors which are set up behind the position of the department manager.
In contrast
, US companies build up to two windows at the left and right sides
as well as
doors at four corners of their
office
.
In addition
, we can see many functional rooms
such
as conference, storage, and printer copiers in the typical
office
of US enterprises.
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