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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph demonstrates the
number
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 of
visitors
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 vacating over a seven-year period on Caribbean
Island
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.
Overall
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, three lines on the chart show the total
number
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 of
visitors
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, and the others contain information about passengers who stayed on the ship and who stayed on the
island
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.
To begin
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 with, the total
number
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 of people visiting the
island
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 generally went up the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 was 1
million
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 in 2010 and 3,5
million
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 in 2017. It showed a continuous increase except for the time between 2015 and 2016.
However
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, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the cruise ship
also
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 showed continued growth except in the years between 2011 and 2012. During that time it showed a decrease from 0,5
million
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 to 0,25
million
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.
On the other hand
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, tourism staying on the
island
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 considerably fluctuated. It remained stable between 2010 and 2011 and between 2013 and 2015.
While
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 the
number
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 of people was nearly 0,75
million
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 at the beginning of 2010, it ended up at 1,5
million
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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