the pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of fairmont island, according to a servey of visitors.
The pie charts provide the composition of the most general benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont Isle, in which the survey was collected from travellers.
Overall
, the people had the highest number among all advantages, Linking Words
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the high cost of living was the majority of disadvantages.
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To begin
, the people and scenery in Fairmont Peninsula became the favourite upsides, which were chosen by tourists, standing at 40% and 37% respectively. It is followed by the good accommodation and culture, in which both of them had slightly similar numbers at around 12 per cent.
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On the other hand
, the living cost in the archipelago, which was so high in that period, had the most dominant figure until reached below half in the downsides. The next disadvantages were the entertainment and the weather in Fairmont isle, which got only a third and a fifth of the tourists, Linking Words
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food quality became the least of the others.Linking Words
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