The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The pie charts give information regarding the expenses of American Citizens the category includes 7 types
such
as food
, cars, petrol, etc. in the years 1966 and 1996.
Overall
, In 1966 there was a big percentage of food
consumption while
the least one was computer users whereas
, in 1996, the highest rate was in car users. As we can see the small piece was in food
.
Glacing at the pie charts reveals that the antiquity human beings like in 1996 the first expenses were in Food
and cars while
other amenities had an approach rate. Furniture has 10 per cent
, Petrol 9 per cent
, and restaurant 7 per cent
. In addition
, other expenses had decreased over the year 1966, in comparison with the year 1996, the first rate was in cars and food
is the second percentage with a figure of 14 per cent
, instead
of that other categories introduce an equal percentage except the restaurant has 14 per cent
is the same with Food
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