The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
The line chart displays the
number
of
complaints
made about
noise
pollution
such
as road works, factories,
traffic
noise
and domestic/
household
in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.
Overall
, in 1980 the highest
number
was more than 600
people
from domestic/
household
.
However
, domestic/
household
decreased continually and rapidly.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
complaints
from road works was increasing constantly until more than 1200 between 1980 and 1984. Especially, the
number
of road works jumped up exponentially from 1986 to 1996. The other two
number
of
complaints
were factories and
traffic
noise
. Their
number
of
complaints
went up gradually and steadily over the decades. The
Number
of factories
was increasing
Wrong verb form
increased
show examples
from 400
people
to almost 700
people
and the
traffic
noise
was originally
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
show examples
number
in 1980, but it increased moderately until 600
people
between 1986 and 1996. In the end, the
traffic
noise
moved ahead of domestic/
household
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, complaints, noise, traffic, household, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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